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connect the dots flipbook-rough draft 69/70

it’s a rough draft. i’m going to do better ones once i wake up from the nap, going to try different type and logo.

5 Comments

Lindsay
February 19th, 2010 at 10:49 am

Hey Joyce–

This is looking good, however, I’m wondering if it’s not set up backwords… meaning, the first dot should be at the beginning and the book should end with the full letterform. Thoughts?
chris
February 19th, 2010 at 8:16 pm

yeah, i guess you made this to use as you did, but reverse would make more sense, and you would hold it like a book while you flip. Nice idea though!

Also, my friend made this connect the dots poster
I took the time to fill it out, and the end result wasnt impressive or worth it. So, learn from that lesson, make sure the end result is something special/ impressive!
Edmund Zaloga
February 20th, 2010 at 10:18 am

I agree it may be better reversed, and also add the book being way thicker would add to the theatrics of it (give more time for viewer to be engaged).
Grant
February 20th, 2010 at 10:20 am

Also, instead of just jumping to a full line drawing of an ‘S’, maybe it could slowly draw it out so that you are applying two things to it, instead of just a ton of dots and then one page of ‘S’.
admin_joyce
February 20th, 2010 at 7:02 pm

thank you guys. yeah i made it reverse so i can show it on the camera. i am also going to actually connect the dots along the animation, i only made one book, so i am going to explore more on the image itself. any ideas?