Monday, April 5th, 2010...8:19 am
25 moments book
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need some suggestions on the title page.
keep in mind the pages look like this. all the buildings will be bind the left side, the skies will be bind on the right side.
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April 5th, 2010 at 3:51 pm
i like the last one the best. but i think “moments” should have a capital “M” too, (and moments is spelled wrong.) i don’t really think you need to have your logo on there so close to the name of the book. seems too cluttered. and is your logo going to be on all your projects? if so, maybe it could go on the last page, or the back or something.
April 6th, 2010 at 8:43 pm
None of these feel like they go with the images that you show inside. I think they can be a little more playful. Also, you have a lot of different type styles going on (4 in each!) for something so simple. Maybe you use the same typeface, but vary the color or the size? Or try a big 25? Also, I don’t think you need “by” before Synergy Project. If you’re branding everything as Synergy Project, it should just live naturally and consistently on everything.
April 7th, 2010 at 3:49 pm
Sarah and Jessica, thanks for the comments!
Sarah, i just put my logo on every project i did to see if they can come together, i guess keeping it in the back is better, because the typeface is so distinct.
Jessica, actually i kept 3 typefaces for each one, and i tried very different style because i want to see different variations, and pick later. i agree this can be more playful.
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